Hey Peggy, I could use your opinion on a new Twilight Fanfic I came up with today. I know real bloody brilliant of me seeing as I have been too busy to work much on Siren but I can't help it lol.
I have not thought of a title yet maybe you have some suggestions,but basically it's a dark version of the original story. Renee and Phil are killed in a car crash sparing Bella with a concussion and slight memory loss. So she ends up with Charlie but what is not known is why Renee left Charlie; he was abusive and got drunk at times. Bella obviously being very small at the time, does not remember or know this.
Sent into a world of fear and depression a mysterious and beautiful young man named Edward, whom eventually being the only one who knows the truth must convince her to speak up and report Charlie.
Like I said it needs a title, and I am self deliberating weather or not Edward is still a vampire or just a human foster child. If He remains a vampire I have this thought that perhaps while chasing down Bella, and watching her try to leave Charlie, James actually ends up drinking Charlie and saving her.
You are the person I am most comfortable and confident going to for ideas